Lady Sydney

I liked it! My only comment is that I felt this line ruined your rhythm: Frustrated, I strike the mold, it breaks. Maybe try... Frustrated, I strike the mold, and ...

I thought it was ok. Not the best, but still pretty good. The first thing that I want to point out as that you need to change all of your ...

Arris, I was only kidding about the ducks, hun! XD They're cute, but as Via mentioned, it would have been better to first do it on paper. As for the ...

Thanks bunches, Mark! Character development was one the hardest things for me to work on in this, so hearing that makes me feel accomplished. ^_^ Thanks again! ~*Syd*~

My computer's acting really funky, so sorry if you end up seeing this twice. lol I loved this. :D The only comment I have is that if you are comparing ...

I loved this. :D The only comment I have is that if you are comparing rainbows to prisoners, it would have a better effect if the poem was more-so about ...

Her boots are adorable!! And don't you just find it cute that her feet can fit in the palm of your hand... or whoever's hand that is? lol She's so ...

These are gorgeous. Black and white photos always seem to have their own effect on people, or at least me, with like a really deep dark feeling. It's not gothic ...

They're cuties! And as Razorblade said, they have the most awesome eyes. XD They just kinda stare at you... unblinking. O_O Hehe. Nice drawings, Fire! ^_^ I expect to see ...

Awesome shots. ^_^ You two looked like you were having fun in the last one. Not to mention, you have really good aim if you took that yourself. Coolness! ~*Syd*~

I really liked this! Excellent use of metaphors. ^_^ I can see how writing and spiders relate based on your descriptions, which, in other words, means well done! Loved your ...

You've been told of what you need to work, so I will say no more than: Work on it. Best wishes. ~*Syd*~

As mentioned before, you need to work on this. A lot. I didn't feel what you were trying to pull across to your readers, which means you may want to ...

:shock: You have my husband as your avatar!! =O Not too fond of him in that picture, but regardless... *steals* lol Welcome to YWS, Jamie! ^_^ It's great to have ...

Aww, that was really sweet. My favorite stanza was: When she is sad I share her pain When she is mad I run Haha! Cute. ^_^ Agreeing with Arieda, though, ...